We're at War (Syfy's Dominion) by athenalentz

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I stopped at page 11. and my only advice here as a writer is that trually Dominion is an awesome but; whenever someone is saying someting it does NOT go in the same paragraph like this: "Alex, just what the hell do you think you two were doing." Being cocky, he grinned, "there was a free buffet can't miss, what you think we were doing?" Alex said more seriously this time "send them to the archangel, it's his problem now."
TFALokiwriter July 5, 2014 at 22:52 . . . I mean like this: "Alex, just what the hell do you think you two were doing." - Being cocky, he grinned, "there was a free buffet can't miss, what you think we were doing?" -Alex said more seriously this time "send them to the archangel, it's his problem now."
TFALokiwriter July 5, 2014 at 22:53 The "-" means being separated. Exactly what I am trying to say. :/ Good luck! Your story sounds really good! :)
athenalentz July 7, 2014 at 15:19 Thank you! just wait I have more comin up! hehe
July 5, 2014 at 22:51