Waiting for the best star by Aline Quinsan Beringhs

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You started well, I like the easy but somewhat literary style. But there are some errors that can be noticed from page 1, including some missing pronouns and punctuations. :) And be sure to write a description to your book, because I was a little confused if this story revolved around the mother or Olivia. Keep up the good work! :)
Aline Quinsan Beringhs February 14, 2015 at 22:47 Hi fair maiden Thak you so much. I´m not American girl and my English is not Advanced. But i need translate my book for americans because Brazilian people are bad readers. So i put my portuguese book on google translator, it´s the reason for those errors ... Sorry
Aline Quinsan Beringhs February 14, 2015 at 22:49 My intension is to know if my book have a good Subject and if my history will be good
fair maiden February 15, 2015 at 06:00 it is good, but you cam always make it better. :) hope my feedback was helpful. don't give up!
February 14, 2015 at 11:35