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The True love
by yashfa ahmadd
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Guys please give me your reviews about the book. I would really appreciate it.
August 18, 2013 at 01:21
At the beginning of the you could describe the setting. It could be her room or the morning itself. What is Rania hearing? What is she feeling? The birds were tweeting outside telling the world to rise. The air was brisk and cold. Just add descriptive sentences like that. I think that the character Rania has a good base. I think you should work on how to write her background story. Maybe you could even start by talking about why she moved to london and how she felt about it. I think the bits with her father are very good because It shows her personality. Overall It's nice because it already show individuality. Keep at it! :)
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July 22, 2013 at 20:54
Thank you so much for your reply. I was thinking the same I should have added more detail. I will edit my book inshaAllah. I hope you would like it. :)
July 16, 2013 at 10:57
Has any one read the first chapter of my book yet do you like it? I would really appreciate your reply so that I can continue.
July 2, 2013 at 11:08