Stories for a Lazy Afternoon by Cesare Barbieri

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Short Stories

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Published Oct 21, 2013 Popular

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Going nowhere slowly. No plot, misplaced suspense about nothing, poor English.
December 28, 2013 at 04:05
Cool story, Cesare. I don't know who the characters are, but I read it thinking about a couple with a daughter. By the way, the woman is a nice character. At the beginning I thought that I would create a connection with the man, but the woman is so sharp. Even when she seems confused or hesitant, in my view, she was completely aware of her objective - call Sofia and catch up about her - and she knew that the man would interpret her hesitance in an imperative way. This psychological game, and the good dialogue, make the story really nice. Congratulations.
Cesare Barbieri October 25, 2013 at 20:14 I'm glad that you got what I wanted to express in my story. I don't really know who exactly is Sofia but I imagine her as their daughter or niece. Thanks for having read it.
Jr. Bellé October 31, 2013 at 17:10 It's similar, anyway, congratulations and I hope you keep writing.
October 24, 2013 at 14:41
Cesare Barbieri, his cape really awakens desire to read, has everything to do with the title, add similar books on your shelf that you also get more exposure!
October 31, 2013 at 13:09
The next story will be "Let's talk about L.A." - Chapter 3
October 27, 2013 at 15:44
Nice story Cesare, but you need to add a description to it in order to reach more readers and be able to have your book chosen to be the book of the week by the Widbook team :)
Cesare Barbieri October 25, 2013 at 20:09 I'm going to do it, thank you ;)
October 24, 2013 at 17:10
Cesare, keep up the good work.
Cesare Barbieri October 24, 2013 at 13:06 Thank you! :)
October 21, 2013 at 15:52