poetry by Alishba Malik

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Published May 29, 2013 Popular

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June 29, 2017 at 14:21
Alishba, Sha, Valkyrie, Firefly and Mandy, you all did a good job. You should do it more often, actually. I felt that you are exploring the language yet, and I will write some comments about poetries that I enjoyed in your short book. Valkyrie wrote only one poem, right? "Roses" are quite good, one of my favorites, and it is not my favorite because, sometimes, you coerced rhymes, this poem doesn't need rhymes, you are wondering about the "soul" of a rose, and it was a wonderful reverie, just let it flow. "The Sky" has potential to become a beautiful verse, but, again, as Valkyrie, there is an unnecessary concern about the rhymes, although "crowds and clouds" is a nice move. Mandy is a rapper, the poem that begins with "I can fly, I can fly, of course, very low, not fast, rather slow", here, the rhymes has a sense of motivation, the speed, the poem ask for a speed and the rhymes help in order to accelerate the reading. Now, Sha. I will pick one of your poetries, but, first of all, please, forget about the italic, it turns the reading harder. "Things to Wonder" is, in my view, the best poem of this book. It is a long verse with a phrase that appear many times, and that is a more refined structure. The rhymes are sweet and subtle, moreover, you, the poet, must have breath and boldness to face an accurate structure as this one, in "Things to Wonder". Congratulations to all of you!
Alishba Malik October 11, 2013 at 23:50 Thank you. If you want, you can help write this book with us. Let me know if you would like to!
September 26, 2013 at 17:00
hey ..i write pretty good stuff when it comes to poetry...can i get some help over here how to manage my book??
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Alishba Malik June 20, 2013 at 01:07 sure!!
Rbea June 20, 2013 at 10:10 thanks a lot.:)
Rbea July 1, 2013 at 01:07 can you guys help me out in book's promotion.and suggest me something after once going through ma stuff...that would be very kind of you..:)
June 16, 2013 at 16:13