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a series of short dialogues... with oneself, people, places and things...
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Jul 29, 2012
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I quite like the idea of ??short dialogues. I think it's a type of text easy to consume and that holds the attention of the reader. I think you could have better explored these dialogues, including some details that helps on holding the attention of your readers. Details in excess are not healthy, the text becomes repetitive. But a good deal of detail helps to improve the imagination of the reader. I've also been thinking here: why the name of the book is Ju? Is there a meaning for that? ;)
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August 13, 2013 at 05:08
Thanks for the thoughts Breno... I have a new revision to the stories where I have taken into consideration your suggestions... ! My approach to dialogue is more ethnographic reflection... bordering on poetry. Will update it soon. "Ju" is a Japanese term meaning 'soft' more as a concept of interaction... as I understand it.
March 18, 2013 at 05:53