I'm a vampire:The beginning by Rin Nes

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Published Jun 04, 2013 Popular

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Hi everyone as you may have seen, I haven't been online for I an while, I am very sorry for this! 😓 I am going to make it up with you all and finish the story. That will take some time, but I will keep my promise!!
November 4, 2016 at 16:48
Hi great book if you would like i can go through and fix some of the English hope you can add more to the book if u need ideas just ask
Rin Nes November 4, 2016 at 16:44 Hi thank you for your feedback, I if you would like to help me with my english that would be great!
February 3, 2016 at 20:54
What can I say, the story is fair, but needs some work on it. The English definitely needs work but for someone writing in a language not there own it is a good attempt. I do recommend that when people are talking to each other in the story that each sentence is on a different line so that you know who is talking: (example) "Hi there," said Matt. "Hi," Kim replied. If you need help proof reading your work and fixing it up, drop me a message. Keep on working at it, and it will get better as you progress.
Rin Nes February 4, 2014 at 12:26 Thanks for the tip! , I will work on it :D If my exams are done I will write the next chapter :P
January 15, 2014 at 11:16
I like the cover. Its pretty fantastic. :)
Rin Nes March 14, 2014 at 23:50 haha yeah I also liked the picture , I did only the writing on it xD
February 25, 2014 at 04:50
Hey guys, sorry that i took me so long for writing this chapter, Monday is my school going to start again and my exams are coming soon so, sorry again if it will take me longer for writing the next chapter. I wanne thank all of you who are reading my book, if you guys have some tips please share them with me :D
January 4, 2014 at 12:09
I love it o.o
December 3, 2013 at 01:20
Hi guys, I know i haven't been writing for a long time, I am having it really busy with my school right now and over 2-3 weeks I will have my first exams. After my exams i promise to continue the story :D, hope you guys can forgive me /.\
October 24, 2013 at 23:12
yeah I like Damon better too he's hot
September 11, 2013 at 01:14
its very buteautiful, i am looking forward to read the next chapter!
June 16, 2013 at 18:38