Clandestine by fair maiden

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Published September 30, 2014 Popular

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JUSTICE FLORA
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April 12, 2017 at 04:28

Georgia Stephen
Absolutely loved it fair maiden! great job
fair maiden June 18, 2016 at 08:56 thank you. I hope you had a good time reading my story. :)
May 26, 2016 at 21:10

fair maiden
and it ends. Someday, maybe someday this fantasy piece of work will be acknowledged and out in the world. Thanks to all of you who read, who feedbacked, and who didn't read which made me all the more stubborn to make it better. :) I cannot forget this journey, hopefully so do you dear readers. thank you once again!
ASMA SIDDIQUI June 13, 2015 at 09:20 Congratulations! Completing a whole Novel is exciting but at the same time a daunting task ( for a lazy person like me) but you completed it very well. Your writing style is captivating and I always loved it. Though Clandestine was totally about Love , I think you can write spell bounding stories from other genre also. I am always here to welcome your stories, so keep writing:)
fair maiden June 15, 2015 at 02:16 Sorry about my late response Asma, but thank you. I sure will write something different the next time as I have been planning to do so. Daunting, but mostly sad also you know. :) Thank you for your support that you kept up, would love to have you as my reader always! ^_^
ASMA SIDDIQUI June 15, 2015 at 08:38 You're very welcome. Take care & smile!
April 24, 2015 at 04:16

Minecraft Chica
So far as i am reading it is really good I love your work I really hope you publish this book so that everyone will see how much of a great and deep writer you are
fair maiden May 15, 2015 at 02:54 That's relly kind of you. I am glad that you have enjoyed the book. I hope for the same! :)
May 14, 2015 at 14:53

Katelyn Judson
Holy jesus! I am only few chapters in, withing 25 minutes and oh my god. I barely even have anything to correct. Just the fact that there are too many italicized words and some of them feel like the wrong words to be that way. Other wise, damn was I into reading it. Great job, Fair.
fair maiden April 23, 2015 at 02:12 oh, You took the trouble just read it??? O_O I apologize, because I wasn't aware of your age..So sorry. And I am surprised that You actually wanted to read it even though it was quite a trouble with the age resttrictions and so on. Well, I will try to find out about the words asap, the story is on it's end. Thank you so much, for the feedbacks. ^_^ Just tell me, have you enjoyed it so far?
Katelyn Judson April 23, 2015 at 17:35 I have most definitely enjoyed it, Fair.
fair maiden April 24, 2015 at 01:50 To me, that's what matters the most when a reader closes my book, and thinks how he s/he had a nice time. ^_^ thank you! do let me know about your final feedback. Look forward to it.
April 21, 2015 at 17:37

Katelyn Judson
This story says that is is too inappropriate for my age, so I suppose I am not able to read it. I apologize, Fair.
fair maiden April 23, 2015 at 02:13 Me too, I wouldn't have made go through the trouble if I knew. I am sorry, really. >_<
April 21, 2015 at 17:09

Katelyn Judson
I have made another account, therefore, I am able to read it, now.
April 21, 2015 at 17:13

Yohana Ekky
This book must have been a featured story! I always love the way you write your stories, FM!
fair maiden March 6, 2015 at 14:07 Featured or not, I am so glad to have you read it at last. :) I would love to think you are not being formal, because you can always point out if there's anything lacking here Missy. :) and FM sounds lovely! :D
Yohana Ekky March 8, 2015 at 16:12 I told you what is lacking, FM. Lol.
March 5, 2015 at 12:50

shikha kashyap
Its so good beyond words......something so addicting n fresh......the way u describe events is awesome......its really a good work......plz keep it up n keep writing more....thank u for this great book......hope u complete it soon.
fair maiden March 3, 2015 at 05:16 I am very glad that you are enjoying this work. yes, I will complete it in a while, stay tooned til then. And thank you for your kind feedback. :)
March 2, 2015 at 17:29

fair maiden
Finished chapter 50 today! THank you all for the sincere support. :)
February 17, 2015 at 04:38

Photographs and Gasoline
Man, you seriously must be a writing wizard or something. Usually I hate romance story's with a passion, but damn, I really can't hate this. In fact, I actually love it. The only downside is that I have to use my friend Caden's account to read it on because apparently thirteen year olds aren't allowed to read it.
fair maiden February 7, 2015 at 08:50 Sorry about the rating, cause it is rated mature and widbook follows that rule. :) I am honoured to have heard that from somebody who writes equally well, and it's a great feeling cause you read it despite hating romance. if you had a good time reading it, that's what matters. Thanks a lot, really. :)
February 6, 2015 at 09:19

Yohana Ekky
You're really good at romance. No wonder many like your work. Good job, girl.
fair maiden February 4, 2015 at 12:24 Finally! Imust be doing a good job if I got you to like as well! :) Thank you! Look forward to your final comments about it>
Yohana Ekky February 5, 2015 at 07:36 Lol. I will do, but I think it will not be that fast, since... you know what the reason is.. Hahahaha. I will be free soon and very soon!!!
fair maiden February 5, 2015 at 08:26 that's better! waiting for that soon to come sooner! :D
February 3, 2015 at 06:28

Alyna
I might cry (!), Just about 4 chapter in and may I just say, Woah. Lovely style of writing, Keep up the excellent work!
fair maiden January 14, 2015 at 02:51 I didn't intend to make you cry! But if my words are able to carry the emotions I wrote them to, I am glad. ^_^ Thank you so much Alyna.
January 13, 2015 at 22:30

Kerr
Hi, I read it and I must say it is interesting and captivating. It is light though very emotional and by light, I also mean in terms of form/structure. The paragraphing and the shortness of the chapters allow the readers to breathe and I think this is necessary. Your style is simple and sometimes very intense. Like the smell of red roses. And I love it. However, a little reproach on the paucity in focus on the environment; the scenery can help bringing useful elements. There are some spelling mistakes but it is okay as long as there is no hindrance in understanding. But overall, it’s such a good story which I am so pleased to read thanks for asking me some critics and keep it up. *.*
fair maiden December 6, 2014 at 09:42 Thanks a bunch. I am delighted to give you a pleasant time, and I will see to it that there's no spelling mistakes, as well as what you advised about the background. THank you for your time Kerr. ^_^
December 5, 2014 at 19:04

fair maiden
I am so glad to have the support, it feeds me and my inspiration to carry on. Have fun reading everyone. :)
December 3, 2014 at 13:23

Nightly
My, such strong passion and vigorous emotions blossoming in this romance ;) I love how it's not just about two opposites attracting and trying to figure each other out, but also trying to figure *themselves* out too, about what they know vs what they feel. It's an exciting challenge, and I can't wait to read along their journey as the story progresses. The only criticism I have is that the story, at least thus far, focuses almost exclusively on the two main characters; there's very little focus on the outside world, or what's going on around them. It's as though reality doesn't really affect them in any serious manner. At the moment their relationship-pattern is like a steady wave of breaking apart and coming together, over and over again. I think at this point the story could use an external force to shake them up and break this pattern, force them into new situations. I'm not sure what exactly, anything from bad rumors circulating about them or an injury/illness, just examples of what I mean. Of course I could just be overstepping myself since there's still more to come, but I thought I'd give my two cents. Looking forward to reading more!
fair maiden November 4, 2014 at 10:02 wow, that's a lovely critic I have got from you Nightly. Thank you for pointing out the weak points. Well, I did struggle at some point, but with the next chapters to come, I have tried to pull it together the way I have had in my mind. Your feedback really helps me focus on the parts that I have had a thought about. Thank you so much. :)
fair maiden November 4, 2014 at 10:30 and the pattern that you talked about, it did cross my mind many times. But I wanted to display the two of them, their mind, their reality, and their imagination more than anything else. At the same time, I have tried to not stray away from the real world. Hope it binds it all together in the later chapters. ^_^ Would love to hear again from you, if you would like.
November 1, 2014 at 03:01

V.E. Paige
Such a beautiful story. :) I'd love to see it progress into something so much more. Keep it up!
fair maiden October 12, 2014 at 15:52 I wish to deliver much much more as well. Thank you a lot. :) Did you find it cliche? Any critic is welcomed.
October 11, 2014 at 08:32

ASMA SIDDIQUI
I really loved the way you have started it and all those things about Love. It is hard to find stories here with such emotional intensity and your description of Emma's pain and battling her own mind is really phenomenal. Waiting for next update.
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fair maiden October 9, 2014 at 03:55 It's just the beginning, but sure u will. :)
ASMA SIDDIQUI October 9, 2014 at 03:56 Good luck:)
fair maiden October 9, 2014 at 03:57 Yep. *_*
October 8, 2014 at 12:13

chi
really started veryyy well :) waiting for the next scenes :) keep it up :*
fair maiden October 5, 2014 at 12:50 Thank you thank you. :) Sure.
October 5, 2014 at 10:06

chi
really started veryyy well :) waiting for the next scenes :) keep it up :*
October 5, 2014 at 10:06

A. Sines
I like this as a beginning. How many stories have begun with such angst! I can see this as a beautiful love story with a couple of plot twists and a happy ending. I also like your unconventional word choices making this a piece of art rather than a simple love story. However, there are a couple of sentences that kind of struggle on the canvas. Reading it out loud will probably help you find them.
fair maiden October 4, 2014 at 15:07 Thank you so very much. That really helped me a lot, cause I am gonna read it and find out all those sentences. perhaps the next time you read it, if you do that is, Please highlight them for me if you find anything else like that. :) Thank you for your time.
fair maiden October 4, 2014 at 15:09 And, good to know a good writer rated it to a four star. You are the first one to rate and comment. So it leaves a meaningful expression for me. Thanks once again. :)
October 4, 2014 at 14:22