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JUST RANDOM POETRY
just some random poems that popped into my head lol enjoy.
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One more book of yours that I'm reading, Jeff. This one is poetry. Ere, I have a predilection to long verses, although I enjoyed "Humble" and "The Last Fight", the rhymes coming quickly, this speed donates a cool rhythm to both of them. But "Left Alone", "Shark Attack" and "Time flys to fast" are stronger in my view. Your verses are full of rhymes, so, the long verses might dilute rhymes making the poetry more flowable. Your vocabulary seems wide, so you can describe images and feelings effectively. Congratulations.
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November 28, 2013 at 20:12
thank you for your comment if you want to see my poetry at its darkest read domestic abuse
November 28, 2013 at 18:31
You have nice poems here, in this book. Many of them are close to lyrics - remember hip hop to me - the rhyme is on the last word, the phrases have similar shapes and proportions, there are few breaking beats, specially on the verses before page forty. But poetries like "Old House" and "Common Man" are really cool. The first poetry books are, generally, like yours, an agglutination of old verses, put side by side, maybe chronologically, maybe attached by a theme or a word. And this blend you did really well. Congratulations.
November 11, 2013 at 18:10
wrote this in 2 hours enjoy
November 9, 2013 at 02:50